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| Studentsf Essays MY TOWN |
| Here we have twelve essays titled 'My Town' written by our students. They wrote these essays in March, 2005 as an assignment in an intensive writing course instructed by our staff Koji Numata, an EFL teacher who is studying as a graduate student at Iwate University now. Through this writing course, these students learned some writing techniques such as mind-mapping, peer feedback etc. They learned them very successfully and now they are skillful writers. You can not only enjoy their essays but also learn a lot about our town Hanamaki from these essays. |
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| A 9th Grader (Male) |
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| A 9th Grader (Male) |
| @@Hanamaki is a very good town in Iwate. First, our town is famous for Miyazawa Kenji. He was a writer@who wrote a variety of fairy tales. Second, my town has the only airport in Iwate. Third, Hanamak is a famous hot spring town. So, why donft you come to our town??? |
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| A 9th Grader (Female) |
| @@My town Hanamaki is a beautiful town. There is a lot of nature in Hanamaki. For example, beautiful nature near in Hanamaki Onsen hot spring. In spring, you can see many beautiful cherry blossoms, in fall, red leaves are good. So Hnamaki is a beautiful town. |
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| A 9th Grader (Female) |
| @@There are many great people from my town . Especially, Miyazawa Kenji is famous in Japan. Once he was a high school teacher. Nitobe Inazo left gNegawakuwa ware taiheiyono hashitonaran,h a wise saying. He was an active person in the world. Therefore, my town is a great town. |
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| A 9th Grader(Female) |
| @@Hanamaki is a very famous city. First, there is the only airport in Iwate. So you can go on a trip by plane. Second, many great men were born in Iwate. For example , Miyazawa Kenji was from Hanamaki. He was a famous writer. Hanamaki is the most famous city in Iwate. |
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| A 9th Grader (Male) |
| @@Hanamaki is one of the most famous towns to visit in Iwate. First, you should visit gHanamaki Onsen kyoh because there you can enjoy both many different hot springs and majestic view of mother nature. Second, you should visit gHanamaki Airporth because hHanamaki Airporth is the only airport in Iwate and you can see planes at close range. Third, you should visit gHanamaki City Museumh because there are many historical things and you can see them. Therefore, you should visit to Hanamaki. We will welcome you any time. |
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| A 9th Grader (Male) |
| @@Hanamaki is the most interesting town. For example, Hanamaki is famous for gWankosobaff because a national meet is held at Hanamaki. It is so exciting. Hanamaki is also famous for many hot springs, gMiyazawa Kenjiff and Hanamaki Festival. Hanamaki is very interesting like this. So, why donft you come to my town? |